Trifextra: Revelation, Part II

Welcome to the weekend prompt at Trifecta Writing Challenge!  This weekend, they asked us to continue one of our 33 word responses with 33 more words.  I chose to follow up on Revelation.  Here’s my original response:

You’re my wife, mother of my children.  You can tell me.  What did the Oracle say?”  He clasped her hands earnestly.

Her voice was ghostly, remote.  “It said that I was your doom.”

And here’s the next bit:

A silence fell.  She stared doggedly into the distance.  Of course, of course it had to come to this.  He was thinking it, she knew. There was nothing else to think.

Her father.

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  1. Michael says:

    I really want to know how her father makes her his doom. So many possibilities there. 😛

  2. Gina says:

    Okay! Thirty-three more please. Her father? Hmmmmm…..

  3. Okay I really need the end of the story. If 33 more words come around again, I can’t wait to read what follows.

  4. lumdog says:

    Yeah, it’s a cliff hanger. And what does dad have to do with this? Well done.

  5. Draug (@Draug419) says:

    I’m going to be in the minority and say I think the original 33 stood best alone. The whole 66 is still very good though (: I think it should continue!

  6. There’s a horrible inevitability to this that makes your characters seem rather vulnerable.

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